I Am The Last One Discussion

[BlackRain]

Welp, I started writing this today for a subreddit on reddit.com called r/I_am_the_last_one.

I decided to post it here, as well, due to it's decidedly Imperial nature, and the fact it's Apocalyptic. Enjoy, fuckers, and talk about it here.

[Parone92]

Interesting, to say the least.

[BlackRain]

Aye. I was just hit by a spurt of inspiration when I was reading the subreddit, and now I've been thinking about what I'll write for my entry tonight all morning.

[BlackRain]

And, while I hate double posting... Update, you ****.

[Mustang MKIII]

I can tell that you're planning to add more to it so I'd need to see the rest before saying anything that could be helpful to you. What's there is good, my only complaint is that I didn't find myself caring about any of the characters at all. That could just be me, seeing as I'm pretty tired right now and that it usually takes a good bit of time to develope characters in a story to the point where people care about them. Hope this helps 

[Twilightpersona]

Your character is female?

[BlackRain]

What part of ****, panties, pregnancy, and period did you miss?

It's only for this story. My 'main' character is still male. Don't get confused.

[Twilightpersona]

So the girl isn't you?

[BlackRain]

... *facepalm*

The **** girl is me. Except **** female! Got it?

[Thuggernaut]

Yeah, remember that Albel's wildest dream is to be a chick.