+- +-

+-User
Welcome, Guest.
Please login or register.
 
 
 
Forgot your password?

+-Stats
Members
Total Members: 29
Latest: The Joker1
New This Month: 0
New This Week: 0
New Today: 0
Stats
Total Posts: 11369
Total Topics: 427
Most Online Today: 16
Most Online Ever: 284
(May 14, 2022, 07:43:40 am)
Users Online
Members: 0
Guests: 92
Total: 92

Cleaning

 The forum will be undergoing maintenance as things progress forward. SMF2 is a little buggy on our forum, and I will be working to iron out some of those bugs, and to restore the forum to a similar and familiar home for us to the one that we used to have.
« previous next »
Pages: 1 2 [3]   Go Down

Author Topic: TIME Discussion  (Read 211 times)

BlackRain

  • Guest
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #30 on: April 27, 2012, 09:45:14 am »
Goooooood. xD You want me to muss up your story with another edit? You're starting to get the hang of it, though.
Report to moderator   Logged

Offline Twilightpersona

  • Adren
  • Silent Dusk
  • ***
  • Posts: 579
  • Silence is priceless
  • Location: The 4th Dimension
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #31 on: April 30, 2012, 06:06:34 am »
Thanks. To be honest I don't see much of a difference between this addition and the one prior to.
Report to moderator   Logged

The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they're going to be when you kill them.

BlackRain

  • Guest
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #32 on: April 30, 2012, 06:52:35 am »
While that is true, you're still improving.
Report to moderator   Logged

Parone92

  • Guest
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #33 on: April 30, 2012, 07:12:43 am »
Pretty good story man. Although you could have done better with the Deja Vu chapter, i feel as though you just copied a lot from the first chapter. Overall very well done though, better than i could do.
Report to moderator   Logged

Offline Twilightpersona

  • Adren
  • Silent Dusk
  • ***
  • Posts: 579
  • Silence is priceless
  • Location: The 4th Dimension
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #34 on: April 30, 2012, 07:16:19 am »
Deja Vu is called Deja Vu for a reason. :P

That chapter signals that the story will be back in the present again.
Report to moderator   Logged

The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they're going to be when you kill them.

BlackRain

  • Guest
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #35 on: April 30, 2012, 08:07:23 am »
Heh. Write more. I need something to read on the bus ride home. xD
Report to moderator   Logged

Offline Twilightpersona

  • Adren
  • Silent Dusk
  • ***
  • Posts: 579
  • Silence is priceless
  • Location: The 4th Dimension
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #36 on: April 30, 2012, 09:05:30 am »
More tomorrow.
Report to moderator   Logged

The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they're going to be when you kill them.

Offline Twilightpersona

  • Adren
  • Silent Dusk
  • ***
  • Posts: 579
  • Silence is priceless
  • Location: The 4th Dimension
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #37 on: May 04, 2012, 06:39:41 am »
More will be posted Tuesday.

No excuses this time. It shall be done.
Report to moderator   Logged

The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they're going to be when you kill them.

BlackRain

  • Guest
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #38 on: May 04, 2012, 08:17:02 am »
Damned well better.  >.>
Report to moderator   Logged

Offline Twilightpersona

  • Adren
  • Silent Dusk
  • ***
  • Posts: 579
  • Silence is priceless
  • Location: The 4th Dimension
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #39 on: May 09, 2012, 04:01:24 am »
It has and it did. Now read it you harbinger of Khorne!
Report to moderator   Logged

The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they're going to be when you kill them.

Offline Twilightpersona

  • Adren
  • Silent Dusk
  • ***
  • Posts: 579
  • Silence is priceless
  • Location: The 4th Dimension
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #40 on: June 29, 2012, 07:31:51 am »
I'm going to take some time soon to write the next chapter, however I don't know how soon I will be posting it on the forum.

Report to moderator   Logged

The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they're going to be when you kill them.

Offline Twilightpersona

  • Adren
  • Silent Dusk
  • ***
  • Posts: 579
  • Silence is priceless
  • Location: The 4th Dimension
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #41 on: July 08, 2012, 09:53:47 am »
New chapter has been posted. It is chapter 6- revelation. Enjoy.
Report to moderator   Logged

The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they're going to be when you kill them.

Offline Twilightpersona

  • Adren
  • Silent Dusk
  • ***
  • Posts: 579
  • Silence is priceless
  • Location: The 4th Dimension
Re: TIME Discussion
« Reply #42 on: July 18, 2012, 07:27:50 am »
I would appreciate any feedback and opinions on my story. Please post it here and NOT in the shoutbox so I  don't drown looking for it, not that I'm mentioning any names...

<.<
>.>

Albel.
Report to moderator   Logged

The dumber people think you are, the more surprised they're going to be when you kill them.
Pages: 1 2 [3]   Go Up
« previous next »
 

Shoutbox
January 09, 2015, 09:35:29 am Superchaos2585 says: SHOUTBOX IS BACK
View Shout History

+-Recent Topics
Xbox 360 Games by Twilightpersona
July 03, 2013, 05:33:23 am
Random Awesome Song by Twilightpersona
July 03, 2013, 05:31:42 am
Watchdogs Game by Twilightpersona
May 22, 2013, 04:52:08 am
This is by far the creepiest anything I've ever seen. by Mustang MKIII
May 05, 2013, 12:21:35 pm
For crazyhobo by Twilightpersona
April 22, 2013, 06:13:54 am
Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion by Twilightpersona
March 27, 2013, 06:47:00 am
Stray Sheep by Mustang MKIII
March 17, 2013, 05:47:21 am
Lone Wanderer's Journal by Twilightpersona
March 04, 2013, 08:57:17 am
The Second Pulse Discussion by Twilightpersona
February 26, 2013, 07:05:35 am
The Second Pulse by Twilightpersona
February 19, 2013, 06:41:46 am