Tyler's first RP!!!!

[TylerH63]

this is my very first comment if you would like may not be long........

Time:5:47 Am
Location:hose house 1
Date:
Weapons:none



He awoke from a cold sweat drenched dream.......As he woke up he lit a ciggert and sat at the table down stairs.Looking at his favorite truck good old rescue.His freind also awoke and went down stairs to make breakfest."So Tyler another Bad dream?"as Nathan asked."yeah,How did you know?"Tyler replied.

"Well besides the fact that it was like a **** swimming pool in you bunk?"Nathan said."very funny fucker"Tyler replied.Nathan started to cook eggs and sausges."So think well be busy?"Tyler asked.
"Nah nothin bad sholud happen today"Nathan replied.

As Nathan cooked breakfest and the others slept.Tyler was left alone with his thoughts.Normally looking for ways to go be destructive he was in a diffrent mood.He was thinking about the news.Last night they were talking about this"Miracle cure"...He laughed at the idea.At most he figured some crazy **** will OD on it and die then her family will get a large settlement from the company.

45 minuets later......

" Well i am **** full"tyler said in a laughing manner."Yep me too"belching said by Crazy.His real name wasn't Crazy but he had a deep Facination with homeless.So they always said he become a crazy motherfucker just like them.And some other people moved off to other areas.

Tyler Went up to the pool room.he played several trick shot games alone.Finally someone came up there It was his buddy chris."Hey wanna play a game of 9-ball?"asked chris."Ehh sure **** it,Lets bet 20$ on this game i need some easy cash."Tyler said.

After 2 games it was split 0/0 "wow well that sucks.""Agian?" Tyler asked."ehh sure i break."Chris said.
Tyler racked up all 9 balls and steped back from the table.Chris broke there was an akward silence.
the Tone droped for a call."Motherfucker"Tyler exhaled."You will be responding to a D.O.A(Dead on arival) At west and main on the 4200 hundred block apartment 1D.

"**** lets go,God damn dead **** dine **** my **** up."Tyler said.As they got geared up Tyler asked nathan"What the **** happend to nothing happening to day!?"with a unlit ciggeret hanging from his lips.Nathan respond " Oh Just shut the **** up and hope in the captains seat."" Fine you driving?"tyler asked Nathan responded with "Yeah".

Tyler hoped in to his seat the captains seat."Ok boys girls welcome to express Holley seat down shut the **** up and get ready!"Tyler yelled as the truck pulled out of the Bay."Rescue 67 in route"Tyler said over the radio."Clear." responded back.

as the truck rolled up to the house they hoped out.Ok lets go get this ****."What do we got?"asked tyler to a cop.Some old lady went died cant get in."Ok watch yourself boys and girls" Tyler said as taking his trusty 8lb. Sledge to the door folding it like a piece of paper."Oh god that smells bad."Tyler exclamed.

Then all of a sudden the old lady went to her feet."Holy ****"Tyler said "Mam are you ok?" Asked the medic.She ran towrdes Tyler,Crazy and chris.Tyler smoked her in the head with the sledge crushing it to pieces." What the motherfucking jesus **** was that!!?" Tyler yelled."Holy **** you killed her."chris yelled.

The old lady got back up......"What the ****!?"Crazy yelled The old lady ran towerds then agian Tyler Hit her as hard as he colud with the Hammer she fell this time for good."I **** told you to stay mother **** down ****."Tyler said As her took another swing with the hammer obliterating her head.

"Dude what the **** is going on?"Crazy asked." I dont have any **** clue."tyler replied. The medic found her medicine it was the "Miracle cure".......Then the radios blew up with calls of officers and men down and DOA's coming back to life.

" Dude we got to go."Tyler said.Chris and crazy both replied "**** yeah."They went back to the station barricading it."Ok guys Just get everything you can together ill be back"Tyler said as leaving off on his favorite triple head harley chopper.

Tyler went to his house and got all of his Guns and ammo.He stoped buy a gun store and picked as much as he colud up.Returning to the fire house he helped barricade.So 3 hours of barricading they wen to the roof to look around.

"Well boys and girls **** has run a cluster ****."Tyler said smoking.

[Meldon]

((This is constructive criticism:
1. Type it up in Word and then copypaste it, that fixes any grammar or spelling mistakes
2. New paragraph when somebody speaks
3. Things went by a bit too fast to follow, take it slower and use more description
4. DESCRIPTION

That being said, I will join you at some point))

[TylerH63]

Ok i wont edit the first post but i will all the other i make becaus eyou know first post history.

[Meldon]

Yeah

[Zhufor]

uhh. what meldon said.