Unaccepted Discussion

[Genericamel]

please discuss my story here or your thoughts on what i have got so far

[Genericamel]

sorry if im not as good as you guys at writing stories this is my first time so cut me sum slack!

[destroyer13]

lol calm down dont worry non of us had a chance to read it and ill be looking forward 2 just not now since its a school night and im busy with gf.

[Genericamel]

ha ok writing atleast 1 chapter tonight with a Prologue

[destroyer13]

Seems interesting >.>

[CrazyHobo]

hey, I liked it.
Seemed short, though.

For a first try, it was good. 

[Genericamel]

hey, I liked it.
Seemed short, though.

For a first try, it was good. 

just the first chapter gonna try and shoot out at least 1 more chapter by this weekend if you wanna be in the story be sure and post here otherwise its gonna be people like modem and crazyhobo and the Draconis and Fenrir and some reapers

[destroyer13]

is therre gunna be beef jerky in ur story? if so than epic!!!!!!!!!!!

[Genericamel]

is therre gunna be beef jerky in ur story? if so than epic!!!!!!!!!!!

guess there could be

[Thuggernaut]

It's good for the first time, but I see lotsa spelling errors, maybe some missing punctuation >_>

[Genericamel]

i can spell check in a bit =/ meh i have great ideas just getting them on paper is whats hard

[destroyer13]

what to chop the meat and man this beef jerky in my mout sticking out makes me feel like im smokin a cigar.

[Genericamel]

destroyer i think im just gonna go ahead and put you in there for the safety of everyone >.>

[destroyer13]

<.< im surprised to see... and damn i was either wasted or somethin on my last post.

[Genericamel]

you can be the guy phoning in on CB