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Offline TRHeadshot

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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #135 on: February 24, 2010, 02:35:12 pm »
Lol! Hell, I shoulda been the one checking for infection, it'd be like, "Hey, Mel... uhhhh.... lemme take care of that.... heheheh" *Squeeze squeeze!* I'm the peeeeeeerveeeert!
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #136 on: February 24, 2010, 04:41:49 pm »
That's why I checked her for bites and not you.
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #137 on: February 24, 2010, 07:24:54 pm »
Quote from: Meldon on February 24, 2010, 04:41:49 pm
That's why I checked her for bites and not you.
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #138 on: February 25, 2010, 01:42:52 am »
URA!!
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #139 on: February 25, 2010, 06:42:09 am »
 #P
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #140 on: February 25, 2010, 10:29:10 am »
lulz
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #141 on: July 18, 2010, 04:25:56 pm »
New chapter, I expect feedback, any kind. Apologicing beforehand because my English isnt nearly as much perfect as my Spanish is, I still hope you enjoy it.
« Last Edit: July 18, 2010, 05:19:29 pm by VoraX »
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #142 on: July 18, 2010, 05:38:16 pm »
I truly enjoy this story, language barrier be damned Vora, you certainly have a way with words, and it's still very understandable.  ;D
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #143 on: July 18, 2010, 10:51:23 pm »
I'm speachless, but I'll try to give a feedback.

It was a bit surprising, that we diverted to normal lives for a chapter. The ending was also surprising: Modem and me got laid  #P

I didnt really feel any language barrier difficulties. I consider your english to be superiour to mine, Archlord.

Excellent chapter, V.
Hope to read more.
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #144 on: July 19, 2010, 05:29:16 am »
Wow, as per usual, I'm impressed, it has just the right combination of mystery, suspense and badassery.

I also love the way my character is portrayed, it's perfection.

Can't wait for more.
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« Reply #145 on: July 19, 2010, 07:26:41 am »
The language is fine; as long as we can understand what you're saying there's no need to fix anything.

I honestly have no idea how I'd react given that situation. You have an amazing skill with description, the kind that makes you want to keep reading more. I hope you have the time for another chapter soon
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« Reply #146 on: July 19, 2010, 08:57:40 am »
I actually love how vorax uses more sophisticated terminology than most native-speakers of English XP
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #147 on: July 19, 2010, 09:09:51 am »
Quote from: TRHeadshot on July 19, 2010, 08:57:40 am
I actually love how vorax uses more sophisticated terminology than most native-speakers of English XP

And I actually love how you attempt to use large words to sound smart, but fail at it =D
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #148 on: July 19, 2010, 01:54:18 pm »
Shut your butts.
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Re: Archlord´s Quest - Discussion
« Reply #149 on: July 19, 2010, 03:47:31 pm »
Chapter 5 posted. I welcome feedback as always.
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