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Offline Zhufor

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Unnamed story-discussion
« on: January 14, 2010, 10:15:18 pm »
all discussion on the unnamed story will be done in here.
« Last Edit: January 20, 2010, 10:53:47 am by Zhufor »
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All mirrors lead to my palace
My Blackened temple of Chaos
Wherein my court is both gracious and insatiable
Pure and obscene
For where pumps the true heart of life
There too seeps corruption
And from this my new Eden of nightshades, black
henbane, sphinxes,
opium and roses weaned on tears and blood
Will rise up like lust
And the shadow of my dark consort shalt extend
Himself across the face of the world...

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Offline Zhufor

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Re: Unnamed story.
« Reply #1 on: January 14, 2010, 10:16:25 pm »
whoops....
« Last Edit: January 14, 2010, 10:17:04 pm by Zhufor »
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All mirrors lead to my palace
My Blackened temple of Chaos
Wherein my court is both gracious and insatiable
Pure and obscene
For where pumps the true heart of life
There too seeps corruption
And from this my new Eden of nightshades, black
henbane, sphinxes,
opium and roses weaned on tears and blood
Will rise up like lust
And the shadow of my dark consort shalt extend
Himself across the face of the world...

Offline CrazyHobo

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Re: Unnamed story.
« Reply #2 on: January 15, 2010, 03:59:35 am »
I enjoyed reading it.

Dusk Golden age of literature, anyone?  ::}
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Offline Zhufor

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Re: Unnamed story.
« Reply #3 on: January 15, 2010, 09:11:14 am »
lol, like i said, it's far from finished, but i figured you guys would enjoy a good read.
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All mirrors lead to my palace
My Blackened temple of Chaos
Wherein my court is both gracious and insatiable
Pure and obscene
For where pumps the true heart of life
There too seeps corruption
And from this my new Eden of nightshades, black
henbane, sphinxes,
opium and roses weaned on tears and blood
Will rise up like lust
And the shadow of my dark consort shalt extend
Himself across the face of the world...

Offline Zhufor

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Re: Unnamed story-discussion
« Reply #4 on: February 07, 2010, 05:07:00 am »
apparently people just don't like walls of text, whether the story is good or not  :'(
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All mirrors lead to my palace
My Blackened temple of Chaos
Wherein my court is both gracious and insatiable
Pure and obscene
For where pumps the true heart of life
There too seeps corruption
And from this my new Eden of nightshades, black
henbane, sphinxes,
opium and roses weaned on tears and blood
Will rise up like lust
And the shadow of my dark consort shalt extend
Himself across the face of the world...

Offline Thuggernaut

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Re: Unnamed story-discussion
« Reply #5 on: February 07, 2010, 05:51:46 am »
I try :(
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Re: Unnamed story-discussion
« Reply #6 on: February 09, 2010, 04:51:42 am »
it's epic, I want more!!!  >:(
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Re: Unnamed story-discussion
« Reply #7 on: February 09, 2010, 05:34:51 am »
alright! that's what i wanted to hear! chapter 2 is now up.
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All mirrors lead to my palace
My Blackened temple of Chaos
Wherein my court is both gracious and insatiable
Pure and obscene
For where pumps the true heart of life
There too seeps corruption
And from this my new Eden of nightshades, black
henbane, sphinxes,
opium and roses weaned on tears and blood
Will rise up like lust
And the shadow of my dark consort shalt extend
Himself across the face of the world...

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Re: Unnamed story-discussion
« Reply #8 on: February 09, 2010, 07:44:08 pm »
loved it.
You write with such detail and passion, that I want chapter 3  ^-^
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Re: Unnamed story-discussion
« Reply #9 on: February 10, 2010, 07:09:26 am »
thanks :). i will post chapter three tonight.
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All mirrors lead to my palace
My Blackened temple of Chaos
Wherein my court is both gracious and insatiable
Pure and obscene
For where pumps the true heart of life
There too seeps corruption
And from this my new Eden of nightshades, black
henbane, sphinxes,
opium and roses weaned on tears and blood
Will rise up like lust
And the shadow of my dark consort shalt extend
Himself across the face of the world...

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Re: Unnamed story-discussion
« Reply #10 on: February 10, 2010, 02:35:05 pm »
By reading these this story sounds good.... i might read it...
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Offline Zhufor

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Re: Unnamed story-discussion
« Reply #11 on: February 10, 2010, 05:23:07 pm »
please do, all feedback is good feedback.
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All mirrors lead to my palace
My Blackened temple of Chaos
Wherein my court is both gracious and insatiable
Pure and obscene
For where pumps the true heart of life
There too seeps corruption
And from this my new Eden of nightshades, black
henbane, sphinxes,
opium and roses weaned on tears and blood
Will rise up like lust
And the shadow of my dark consort shalt extend
Himself across the face of the world...

Offline Zhufor

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Re: Unnamed story-discussion
« Reply #12 on: February 12, 2010, 10:39:03 am »
chapter three is now up.
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All mirrors lead to my palace
My Blackened temple of Chaos
Wherein my court is both gracious and insatiable
Pure and obscene
For where pumps the true heart of life
There too seeps corruption
And from this my new Eden of nightshades, black
henbane, sphinxes,
opium and roses weaned on tears and blood
Will rise up like lust
And the shadow of my dark consort shalt extend
Himself across the face of the world...

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Re: Unnamed story-discussion
« Reply #13 on: February 12, 2010, 11:19:24 am »
yay, more reading for me...even though I'm exhausted after taekwondo  :D
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Re: Unnamed story-discussion
« Reply #14 on: February 12, 2010, 11:42:35 am »
read it.

Zhufor, don't you **** die on me >:(
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