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Offline Thuggernaut

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The Hole - Discussion
« on: January 14, 2010, 12:40:37 pm »
Gotta love Jarki xD
I'd ask you to elaborate more on a whole region vanishing but I'm sure you'll get to that later. Other than that I like it so far.

Offline Sir Modemkill, Cyborg!

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« Reply #1 on: January 14, 2010, 12:53:04 pm »
I will, the first Chapter, and maybe the next, are just for charachter introduction purposes. :P

Offline Zhufor

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« Reply #2 on: January 14, 2010, 02:37:24 pm »
it's really good, i hope im in it.  @|. lol
All mirrors lead to my palace
My Blackened temple of Chaos
Wherein my court is both gracious and insatiable
Pure and obscene
For where pumps the true heart of life
There too seeps corruption
And from this my new Eden of nightshades, black
henbane, sphinxes,
opium and roses weaned on tears and blood
Will rise up like lust
And the shadow of my dark consort shalt extend
Himself across the face of the world...


Offline TRHeadshot

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« Reply #3 on: January 14, 2010, 02:42:13 pm »
This sounds awesomeepicwinnages auce! And, also, what Zhu said! I wanna be in the stowwie too!

Offline Sir Modemkill, Cyborg!

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« Reply #4 on: January 14, 2010, 02:58:02 pm »
Aye, you two will most likely be in it as Crazy's new recruits or something.  >:}

@Jarki: Please do!  #P

Offline TRHeadshot

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« Reply #5 on: January 14, 2010, 03:07:20 pm »
But, b...b...but!  :'( I iz a Reaper nao! Why would I be a new recruit?

Offline Sir Modemkill, Cyborg!

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« Reply #6 on: January 14, 2010, 03:15:41 pm »
Idk, I need some way to fit you in. :P

It's not set in stone though, so any suggestions are welcome.

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Re: The Hole
« Reply #7 on: January 14, 2010, 04:54:58 pm »
Lovin it so far Modem 3>
Writin Hunted is hard i keep getting writer blocks :(

Offline Sir Modemkill, Cyborg!

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Re: The Hole
« Reply #8 on: January 14, 2010, 06:57:29 pm »
HOLY ****!

I really do make a lot of mistakes...I tend to run on too much, no idea why. T_T

Be mai editor?

@Everyone, don't worry, I plan on including just about everyone at some point in the story, though for some of you, I may ask for a lil background.

Also, I think the Notice Idea is actually better, thanks Jarki, I'll change that tomorow before I start writing up the next chapter. :)

And you're also right about the name usage, I actually don't know why I had it the way I did, I'll change that too.  #P


Offline Sir Modemkill, Cyborg!

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Re: The Hole
« Reply #9 on: January 14, 2010, 07:06:38 pm »
 3>

Also, I plan on doing the chapters daily, well, every day I have the time/feel like it.

>.>

But I promise this wont become another "Rise of an Empire" for anyone who remembers that.   :-[

Offline CrazyHobo

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Re: The Hole
« Reply #10 on: January 14, 2010, 07:20:33 pm »
I **** loved it  3>
Loved my portrayal in it.
Actually, I do always sadistically grin in real life  :P

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Offline Sir Modemkill, Cyborg!

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Re: The Hole
« Reply #11 on: January 14, 2010, 07:25:32 pm »
ok this is gonna bother me unless i post it i thought this was somthing really sexual at first LMAO!!! XD XD

Heh, I knew that would come eventually, I just didn't know from who. :P

Kinda expected tuggeh actually. >.>


I **** loved it  3>
Loved my portrayal in it.
Actually, I do always sadistically grin in real life  :P

Glad you liked it. ^_^

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Re: The Hole
« Reply #12 on: January 14, 2010, 07:27:14 pm »
Modem, how bout making a discussion thread in the Discussions section?
Personally, it'd be a pain in the ass for me to scroll through the comments to see the next chapter.

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Offline Sir Modemkill, Cyborg!

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Re: The Hole
« Reply #13 on: January 14, 2010, 07:29:11 pm »
Sure, I'll do that now.


No more posts after this one, please use the discussion thread that is about to go up.

Offline Sir Modemkill, Cyborg!

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The Hole - Discussion
« Reply #14 on: January 14, 2010, 07:29:44 pm »
Yeah, you know the drill.  ::}

 

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