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The Pack Circle / Re: Stray Sheep
« Last post by Mustang MKIII on March 06, 2013, 04:45:35 pm »
Stray Sheep Cpt 6
Francis Mutton

   

   “Francis Mutton. Where were you on the night of June fourteenth at 6:00 P.M.?”

   I can’t tell him anything. There’s no proof and he probably doesn’t think I did it. Just standard procedure. “I–I was backstage at my s–s–school getting ready to go onstage at that t–time.”

   “You were the only student involved with that situation we couldn’t find afterwards. Where were you?”

   “I–I was asked to sp–sp–speak thre Shepherd’s Praise and I got so nervous I fainted. I was t–to embarrassed to stay s–s–so I went home.”

   “You left the play even though you were the sheep? That’s not very nice, the sheep is very important.”

   “I know officer. I’m not proud of what I did.”

   “About what time was this?"

   “It was about 6:15.”

   “Can anyone confirm this?”

   “N–n–n–no officer. My parents were working that night. I got home a few hours before them.”

   “I see. Boy, I’m going to ask you a question and I want you to answer truthfully. Did you start that fire?”

   “N–n–no officer! It w–wasn’t m–me.” Crap, this isn't good.

   “Are you sure you ar—“

   What the– did the tv change channels? “Citizens of Querra. I am the Black Sheep.”  What in the hell is this?
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The Pack Circle Discussion / Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Last post by Mustang MKIII on March 05, 2013, 07:06:33 am »
I personally like that idea of them being romantic. I always felt there was something between the LW and Amata; even when I played a female  ^-^
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The Pack Circle Discussion / Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Last post by Twilightpersona on March 05, 2013, 06:56:36 am »
I've skipped the G.O.A.T. because I'm trying to think of something to put in place of it, like I said "Add my own touch."

I also thought about skipping it completely though...if you'd rather me include my version let me know. I'm at a bit of a split decision, you could be the tie breaker.

By the way, I was curious about your opinion of the relationship between my character and Caitlin. I wanted to sort of put emphasis on it and make it a bit more romantic or something. Any ideas?
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The Pack Circle Discussion / Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Last post by Mustang MKIII on March 04, 2013, 09:27:52 am »
It's interesting so far, less evil though. I am wondering why you skipped the GOAT. That was a pretty funny part in the game.
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The Pack Circle Discussion / Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Last post by Twilightpersona on March 04, 2013, 09:00:18 am »
Alright, the beggining is finnaly finished. I've changed character names and situations in the game to sort of add my own touch. I think that if the game had played out this way it would have been even more amazing.  ;D
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The Pack Circle / Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal
« Last post by Twilightpersona on March 04, 2013, 08:57:17 am »
19 Years Old


I wake up to the sound of gunshots and alarms going off throughout the vault. I hear the sound of someone running down the hall towards my room. Why would someone be heading this way? Then a thought crosses my mind: Gunshots, Alarms, and the sound of someone running towards my location…is this person coming to kill me? I decide it might be a good idea to grab the 9mm pistol I had hidden in my dresser. I check the clip to find only three bullets were in it. I was lucky to have that many since the gun was stolen in the first place. I would have to make every shot count. I take aim as my bedroom door opens. Suddenly my friend Caitlin walks in holding a pistol of her own. Had my own friend come to kill me? I keep my gun aimed at her with my finger on the trigger.

“Caitlin, what are you doing?”

“I could ask you the same thing, why are you pointing that gun at me? Where did you get a gun in the first place anyway?”

“Tell me where you got yours first.”

“William, we don’t have time for this!”

“Answer my question!”

“Fine…I stole it from my father, okay?”

“Or maybe he gave it to you when he sent you to kill me.”

“What? I can’t believe this; you think I’m here to kill you?”

“You and I both know your Dad isn’t very fond of me…I just never thought you would take his side.”

“My Dad may be The Overseer but that doesn’t mean I do everything he says. If I was here to kill you I would have done it already.”

“You would have died trying…just like that guy.”

“What guy?”

“Don’t move.” I pull the trigger of my gun and a single bullet flies through the air just barely missing Caitlin and hitting the man behind her right between the eyes killing him instantly.

Caitlin quickly spins around to see the man lying on the floor. “Oh my god…you killed him!”

“You should be thanking me; he was going to kill you.”

“Where did you learn to shoot like that anyway?”

“Remember the BB gun my Dad gave me when I was younger? I used to practice shooting targets all the time. Using a pistol is just as easy.

“That reminds me…I came here because your Dad left the Vault. My Dad already had the security soldiers kill Devon for helping him escape. You need to get out too, before they find you.”

“So you came to help? …I am so sorry I accused you of trying to kill me.”

“Don’t worry about it, you just saved my life so…apology accepted.”

“So how do I get out of here?”

“When your Dad opened the Vault door a bunch of radroaches got inside. Security is preoccupied killing them right now so you may be able to sneak past them and reach the door.”

“What if that doesn’t work? I’ve only got two bullets left.”

“Here, take my Dad’s gun. I was going to give it to you in the first place.”

“Keep it, I can use my old BB gun and baseball bat.”

“As long as you promise not to die on me.”

“I promise. I’ll meet you at the vault door.”

I reach out to hug Caitlin but instead she ends up making out with me and runs off afterward saying “If you want more you better reach that door.” I definitely plan on it.

I walked out into the hallway and took the security armor off the guy I shot earlier and put it on. I head down the hallway until Connor catches up to me. He asks me to help him save his younger sister from some radroaches.

“Why can’t you do it yourself?”

“Those things…I can’t go near them…they freak me out. Please help, I don’t want to lose my sister, she’s all I got left of my family!”

“Okay, Okay, take me to her.”

I follow Connor to his sister and pull out my baseball bat to kill the radroaches. After his sister is safe she runs over to him and hugs him.

“Thank you, for saving her. If I can do anything to repay the favor please let me know.”

“Well, I’m leaving the vault and I don’t want to wear this stuff anymore.”

“I’ve got just the thing. You can take this old trench coat and suit. My Dad told me it used to belong to some strange guy he used to travel the world with.”

I put it on and say goodbye to him then head through the cafeteria and upstairs to avoid two security soldiers. I remember that The Overseer’s office is on this floor so I decide to go there, maybe I could find some info on his computer. On the way there I see two dead security officers. Caitlin must have been here…But why was she upstairs? I enter The Overseers office and turn on his computer. It was password protected. I didn’t have time to try and hack it so I searched through his desk hoping he had written the password down somewhere but I found nothing. Then my eyes wandered over to the lockers against the wall. I quickly looked through them and found the password along with some 9mm pistol rounds. I enter the password into the computer and it turns on. I couldn’t believe his password was “Overseer is cool”. I find out that the people of the vault have been outside before and found out it was safe but for some reason they decide to stay in the vault anyway. No wonder my Dad left…he must of realized how stupid that was too. I just wish he would of told me first. As I get ready to turn the computer off I see a strange option that says “Open secret tunnel”. Curious where the tunnel might lead I click the option and step away from the desk as it raises up towards the ceiling revealing a stairway underneath. I navigate the tunnel and it leads me to a dead end. I notice a light switch on the wall and wonder why it’s there since there were no light bulbs down there. I decide to flip the switch into the “On” position and suddenly the wall in front of me opens. I walk through the opening to find myself at the vault door but Caitlin was nowhere to be found. I approach the button to open the vault door when the door behind me suddenly opens. I turn around to see The Overseer holding Caitlin like a hostage with his pistol to her head.

“Don’t push that button or I’ll pull the trigger.”

“You’d kill your own daughter just to get to me?”

“It’s not the way I want it to happen but I have to stop you.”

“Why? What’s the point? One less mouth for you to feed.”

“I don’t have to argue with you…I’ve got the woman you love at gunpoint. Do as I say or I pull the trigger.”

“You forgot one thing.”

“And what would that be?”

“I’ve got a gun too.”

I quickly take my gun out of its holster and carefully aim away from Caitlin. I pull the trigger and the bullet flies through the air and hits The Overseer’s hand causing him to drop his gun. Caitlin gets away as her father reaches for his gun on the ground. He picks it up and shoots at me but misses due to his bloody hand shaking uncontrollably. He drops the gun as he falls to the ground on his knees crying.

“You were right, I can‘t kill my own daughter. And it would be wrong for me to stop you from going after your father.”

“Well I’m glad you’ve come to your senses, but I can’t trust you. You threatened Caitlin’s life once already.”

Caitlin approaches me as she speaks “I believe him.”

“You think you’ll be safe?”

Caitlin nods. “I’ve never seen my father like this before…He’s never cried before either. We’ll be fine, you go find your father.”

“Okay, but only because I trust you. Maybe one day we’ll see each other again.”

“I hope so.”

As I turn to leave Caitlin catches up to me. “I almost forgot my promise.”

Caitlin makes out with me again as she presses her body against mine. Afterward we say our goodbyes. I shield my eyes as I walk outside into the bright new world. Eventually my eyes adjust and I get a good look at the world. I say goodbye to the vault and begin the search my father…And some food.
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The Pack Circle Discussion / Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Last post by Mustang MKIII on February 28, 2013, 09:09:32 am »
Can't wait to read it.  :)
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The Pack Circle Discussion / Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Last post by Twilightpersona on February 28, 2013, 09:00:29 am »
Alright, I got most of the story finished now. I hope to post it soon.

Also, as a hint of what's to come I'll just say that I've made some interesting changes to the original plot.
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The Pack Circle / Re: Stray Sheep
« Last post by Mustang MKIII on February 27, 2013, 06:26:04 pm »
Stray Sheep Cpt 5
Marilyn Adair


   “You know Lucian, it seems as though you have a good amount of responsibility around here for someone so young. You’re about twenty, right? Also, as I recall, you were always a cut up in my class.”

   “Animus gives more responsibility to those who can handle it. I designed our stun gloves and regularly preform field operations when Animus needs it. Besides I only screwed around so much because your class was so boring.”

   Please. “Boring huh? You went out of your way to abduct me because I’m boring?”

   “You misunderstand. Your CLASS was boring, but you personally, I find very interesting and inspiring. Ms. Adair, the way you talked about equality is why I’m here.” Glad I could get through to someone. “Although, the reason I’m personally showing you around is because we already know each other."

      I suppose it makes sense that Lucian is giving me the tour seeing as we are acquainted already.  “So, the entire organization lives in this apartment complex?” This place could use more trees, it's somewhat drab.

       “Yeah, Ramirez was generous enough to let us stay in them. Not for free though, Animus picks up the bill for room, board, and all other expenses.” How could someone have that much money and be so completely anonymous? No one knows his real name and I don’t recognize his face...

       “Which apartment was it again?”

      “ I believe its apartment 321.”

     “Right. Why is it necessary that I sleep here?”

    “Well, part of that is convenience. You’ll be easier to reach if you stay here. The other reason is security. If there are any traitors among us, it would be easier to catch them sending information to the government to the government or Sheepdogs; not that you would, but better to be careful. We’d all be executed for high treason if word of what we’re doing gets out. Here we are apartment 321. Before we move on, do you have any questions?”

    “Two actually. Can I bring anything from my house and what would you guys do if I refused to live on the premises?”

    “You can bring your personal hygiene supplies, two weeks worth of clothes, and some personal items like pictures or something. A one-size fit all sheep costume is in your apartment complete with a stun glove. As for refusing to comply, we would put you in a warehouse with everyone else we kidnapped. You know way too much about what we’re doing to let you go free."  He’s smiling, but I can tell that isn’t a joke.

   Speaking of security problems… “What about the people that aren’t in our little group?

     “The neighbors? There aren’t any. When Ramirez agreed to let Animus make these apartments our base of operations we got rid of the other tenants.”

     “You didn’t kidnap them all, did you?”

     “Of course not! We aren’t stupid. That would be over forty people including children; way too many people to go missing all at once from the same small area. We filled some of their apartments with opossums, bought some others out of their leases, and we recently used the Black Sheep legends to scare the rest of them away.”

    “That’s very impressive.” I suppose I should expect nothing less from a group of people plotting the over throw of the government.

    “Now for a quick tutorial on how to use the stun glove. Come on, lets go to the cellar.”

*         *        *

    Not very much light down here huh? “Here, put this glove on.” So, they keep some of their equipment in the cellars. Wow, the stun glove is really soft. Like high quality wool. A little bulky with the battery pack though. “One-size fits all. You might even say it fits like a glove.”

      That’s nice, making a joke as he’s about to show me how to use a weapon. "I’m not sure if that joke was genuinely funny or if I’m only smiling because it was the most exceedingly corny thing I’ve ever heard.” How cute, Lucian kind of looks like a little kid when he blushes.

       “Anyways. Do you see the button on the back of the glove? Press it. To shut it off press the button again. When the glove is on do not touch the palm, it will shock you.”

      “So, you said you designed these gloves?”

      “Yeah, I reverse engineered the technology from the shock batons the Sheepdogs use and put it in glove form. Now prepare yourself.”

      “Prepare for wha–“ You son of a ****!

      “That’s what it feels like to get hit in the gut and have every muscle in your body contract all at once.”

      “You son of a ****!”

      “Hey, hey, I’m really sorry, but you need to know what that feels like. We’re doing something big tonight and if we run into trouble you could find yourself up against a Sheepdog and his shock baton. Not that it’s likely you’ll run into anything with the position you’re taking, but still."

     “What’s the mission and my part in it?”

     “Animus is going to fill in everyone who’s coming, but for the moment thrust your palm into my gut as hard as you can.”

     “Can do.” That was actually very satisfying. “I enjoyed that more than I thought I would.”

     “Good for you.” The little punk shouldn’t have shocked me like that. My pocket is vibrating. A text. Meeting in building A. Probably the mission.

     “Come on. Building A is the big one.”

*      *     *

    “Tonight, we shall descend upon the XYZ news station. We will be sending a very important message to the people of Querra.” So, we’ll be going after the Omega line, the override channel for government announcements. Yeah, this is definitely high treason. “Weir, Poolhaus, and Shackleford are going to remotely set off twenty different silent alarms in banks to distract the police. Orion, you will kill the power on the block and restore power once we get to the broadcast room. Adair will run mission control from one of the vans; she’ll be monitoring the police radio and guiding us to our destinations within the buildings with blue prints. Washington will set up the smoke machines and guard Adair. The rest of us will enter the station, subdue the workers and commandeer the broadcast.  Large and imposing, with a deep booming voice, and knows exactly what he’s doing. I can see why he’s the leader. Though I wonder why he’s so devoted to this cause, I’d figure someone with the means to fund something like this would be content with the status quo. “Remember, we are the vanguards if change! We will bring about the future! The politicians would call us traitors, stray sheep, but it is them who have strayed from the path of the righteous protectors their namesake implies. They see Sheep and Sheepdogs as noting more than animals, existing only to serve them. So, I’ll say it again. We are the vanguards of change!”

      We may dress up like sheep, but I can see that we’re wolves in sheepskin, and we’re going for the jugular.
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The Pack Circle Discussion / Re: The Second Pulse Discussion
« Last post by Twilightpersona on February 26, 2013, 07:05:35 am »
...Well, you got the basics.

A Dalek is an alien from a planet called Skaro. The inhabitants of that planet are called Kaled. Which are actually supposed to be peaceful if I remember correctly, but some of the Kaled are taken and have all emotions wiped from their minds except hate. They are then put into the metal "robotic" shell and called Daleks. (Also Dalek is an acronym for Kaled, which explains why they are called Daleks.)

The TARDIS is a time machine that is bigger on the inside. It is not really a "Phonebooth" it is only disguised as one. The TARDIS has the ability to disguise itself as an object nearby where it lands so it doesn't draw suspicion by looking out of place, but The Doctor's TARDIS has a problem with it's disguise mechanism so it is stuck with the appearance of a phonebooth permanently.
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