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Offline Twilightpersona

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Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« on: November 29, 2012, 08:13:07 am »
Ok here we will discuss anything that you may think is missing/wrong, tell me what can be improved upon, etc. However you will notice that some things have been intentionally changed to give my character more of an identity. Please enjoy.
« Last Edit: November 29, 2012, 08:13:41 am by Twilightpersona »
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2012, 09:39:59 am »
I have written a considerable amount in the past few days for the journal. It's written on paper so I have to type it, check for errors, and then post it. So it'll be piecing together fairly quickly for now.
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #2 on: December 10, 2012, 05:41:55 am »
Next part is up.
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #3 on: December 10, 2012, 02:37:36 pm »
I can see that you're character is going to be evil isn't he?
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #4 on: December 18, 2012, 09:27:24 am »
Maybe...
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #5 on: February 28, 2013, 09:00:29 am »
Alright, I got most of the story finished now. I hope to post it soon.

Also, as a hint of what's to come I'll just say that I've made some interesting changes to the original plot.
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #6 on: February 28, 2013, 09:09:32 am »
Can't wait to read it.  :)
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #7 on: March 04, 2013, 09:00:18 am »
Alright, the beggining is finnaly finished. I've changed character names and situations in the game to sort of add my own touch. I think that if the game had played out this way it would have been even more amazing.  ;D
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #8 on: March 04, 2013, 09:27:52 am »
It's interesting so far, less evil though. I am wondering why you skipped the GOAT. That was a pretty funny part in the game.
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #9 on: March 05, 2013, 06:56:36 am »
I've skipped the G.O.A.T. because I'm trying to think of something to put in place of it, like I said "Add my own touch."

I also thought about skipping it completely though...if you'd rather me include my version let me know. I'm at a bit of a split decision, you could be the tie breaker.

By the way, I was curious about your opinion of the relationship between my character and Caitlin. I wanted to sort of put emphasis on it and make it a bit more romantic or something. Any ideas?
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #10 on: March 05, 2013, 07:06:33 am »
I personally like that idea of them being romantic. I always felt there was something between the LW and Amata; even when I played a female  ^-^
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #11 on: March 07, 2013, 09:54:12 am »
Nice lol, but I was wondering if you had any ideas on how to make it more realistic or something?
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Re: Lone Wanderer's Journal Discussion
« Reply #12 on: March 27, 2013, 06:47:00 am »
I've come up with something to replace the G.O.A.T.
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