Fenrir's Fangs

I like the idea, Mustang. I haven't seen that many stories, where the reader gets into the mind of a cybernetic or synthetic being.
The initial naration was good, but the dialog part should be worked on a bit.

What I'm saying is that you've been building up momentum with the story from the very beginning and it was raised to a high point, then it suddenly dropped to zero after the protagonist devided by zero (Tuggy's gonna laugh). The whole energy of the story was lost midway.

My advice is to learn how to gradually build up and then decrease the momentum of the story.  In this type of storytelling, the process needs to be a gradual escalation then a gradual decline. Your story's momenum plummeted in the middle.

I'm being brutally honest because that's what you asked for and I respect you for wanting to perfect your writing style. You have potential. Just gotta keep training.