x3 Thanks, mate. I haven't written in ages, and I did that in thirty minutes.
Anyway, write more like it's a novel, rather than a dialogue chronicling. Makes for a much more descriptive, entertaining read.
If you want, until you get the hang of it, I can convert your basic dialogues into something like that, provided I'm one step ahead of everyone else in terms of story. It's easier to put proper literary elements in there in that case.
Also, since I'm here, I seem to have developed a liking for story telling, despite my ignorance to the art, so if anyone could come up with a story line for me to write with, I'd appreciate it greatly.