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Re: Subject-0221 "Crazy Hobo" discussion
« on: September 06, 2011, 06:31:02 am »
Very good, sir!
This may help jump start some activity.

Today's English lesson: While "on the move" may make some sense, it's probably not the terminology you should use. Something like "this was all improvised, no planning" or "it was written spur of the moment" Also, you wrote "questinos" by accident.

As for the story, I'll help with grammar and stuff there, later. All I can really say is good job and give you English tips =P
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