Posted by: Mustang MKIII
« on: January 31, 2013, 11:37:34 am »Lol, that wa not intentional but amusing.

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Posted by: Mustang MKIII« on: January 31, 2013, 11:37:34 am »Lol, that wa not intentional but amusing.
Posted by: Twilightpersona« on: January 31, 2013, 07:11:47 am »I like the jokes, or at least what I think are intended as jokes. For example the dialouge: "I'm only a teacher Harry." made me laugh because I thought maybe it was a clever joke about Harry Potter when someone said: "You're a wizard Harry."
![]() Posted by: Mustang MKIII« on: January 28, 2013, 11:33:14 am »Glad to contribute to the apocalypse
Also, in addition to telling me the flaws could you guys tell me what exactly about the story works.Posted by: Twilightpersona« on: January 16, 2013, 07:38:09 am »This is my official response: Holy ****...Alex actually ventured into the Stories. This can mean only one thing....one of the seals of the Apocalypse has been broken! :O Thanks alot Alex. Albel drawing Pokemon was another one, now this. Posted by: Superchaos2585« on: January 14, 2013, 07:03:35 pm »This is my official response:
... MOAR! Posted by: Twilightpersona« on: January 03, 2013, 06:04:31 am »I didn't read the whole thing, just skimmed it pretty much. So far it looks good though. I'll have to read more in depth when I get the chance.
Posted by: Mustang MKIII« on: December 24, 2012, 09:13:16 pm »Please be honest with me, I won't improve much otherwise.
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