Posted by: Twilightpersona
« on: May 04, 2012, 06:39:41 am »More will be posted Tuesday.
No excuses this time. It shall be done.
No excuses this time. It shall be done.

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Posted by: Twilightpersona« on: May 04, 2012, 06:39:41 am »More will be posted Tuesday.
No excuses this time. It shall be done. Posted by: Twilightpersona« on: April 30, 2012, 09:05:30 am »More tomorrow.
Posted by: BlackRain« on: April 30, 2012, 08:07:23 am »Heh. Write more. I need something to read on the bus ride home. xD
Posted by: Twilightpersona« on: April 30, 2012, 07:16:19 am »Deja Vu is called Deja Vu for a reason.
![]() That chapter signals that the story will be back in the present again. Posted by: Parone92« on: April 30, 2012, 07:12:43 am »Pretty good story man. Although you could have done better with the Deja Vu chapter, i feel as though you just copied a lot from the first chapter. Overall very well done though, better than i could do.
Posted by: BlackRain« on: April 30, 2012, 06:52:35 am »While that is true, you're still improving.
Posted by: Twilightpersona« on: April 30, 2012, 06:06:34 am »Thanks. To be honest I don't see much of a difference between this addition and the one prior to.
Posted by: BlackRain« on: April 27, 2012, 09:45:14 am »Goooooood. xD You want me to muss up your story with another edit? You're starting to get the hang of it, though.
Posted by: Twilightpersona« on: April 26, 2012, 08:03:23 am »Albel your wish has been granted.
Posted by: BlackRain« on: April 25, 2012, 12:16:51 pm »... More, god damn it. >:C
Posted by: Twilightpersona« on: April 25, 2012, 09:20:22 am »I have added the little bit I wrote today. I will have more time to write it tomorrow. In the mean time, Albel, try to avoid destroying the author.....namely me.
Posted by: Twilightpersona« on: April 25, 2012, 04:03:02 am »I shall avert my demise and write more today.
Posted by: BlackRain« on: April 24, 2012, 10:21:05 am »Give me more. Or I shall destroy you. >:C
Posted by: BlackRain« on: April 20, 2012, 07:00:43 pm »Huh. Alright then. o.O
Posted by: Twilightpersona« on: April 20, 2012, 04:58:37 am »yea I based it off what I read of his description in his story.
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