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Posted by: Sir Modemkill, Cyborg!« on: July 19, 2010, 05:29:16 am »Wow, as per usual, I'm impressed, it has just the right combination of mystery, suspense and badassery.
I also love the way my character is portrayed, it's perfection. Can't wait for more. Posted by: CrazyHobo« on: July 18, 2010, 10:51:23 pm »I'm speachless, but I'll try to give a feedback.
It was a bit surprising, that we diverted to normal lives for a chapter. The ending was also surprising: Modem and me got laid  I didnt really feel any language barrier difficulties. I consider your english to be superiour to mine, Archlord. Excellent chapter, V. Hope to read more. Posted by: TRHeadshot« on: July 18, 2010, 05:38:16 pm »I truly enjoy this story, language barrier be damned Vora, you certainly have a way with words, and it's still very understandable.
 Posted by: VoraX« on: July 18, 2010, 04:25:56 pm »New chapter, I expect feedback, any kind. Apologicing beforehand because my English isnt nearly as much perfect as my Spanish is, I still hope you enjoy it.
Posted by: Thuggernaut« on: February 25, 2010, 10:29:10 am »lulz
Posted by: TRHeadshot« on: February 25, 2010, 06:42:09 am »Posted by: Thuggernaut« on: February 25, 2010, 01:42:52 am »URA!!
Posted by: CrazyHobo« on: February 24, 2010, 07:24:54 pm »That's why I checked her for bites and not you.this Posted by: Meldon« on: February 24, 2010, 04:41:49 pm »That's why I checked her for bites and not you.
Posted by: TRHeadshot« on: February 24, 2010, 02:35:12 pm »Lol! Hell, I shoulda been the one checking for infection, it'd be like, "Hey, Mel... uhhhh.... lemme take care of that.... heheheh" *Squeeze squeeze!* I'm the peeeeeeerveeeert!
Posted by: destroyer13« on: February 24, 2010, 02:34:27 pm »Excellent! I love how you portrayed me, maybe just a little too stupid however XP maybe he was trying to be like u but portray the other stupider side <.< Posted by: Meldon« on: February 24, 2010, 02:33:21 pm »Excellent! I love how you portrayed me, maybe just a little too stupid however XP"Peeerveeert!" Posted by: TRHeadshot« on: February 24, 2010, 12:37:26 pm »Excellent! I love how you portrayed me, maybe just a little too stupid however XP
Posted by: Sir Modemkill, Cyborg!« on: February 24, 2010, 10:31:14 am »Just read it, pretty cool man.
Posted by: CrazyHobo« on: February 24, 2010, 10:27:54 am »something tells me, that I'll have to endure something crazy.
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