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Posted by: Meldon
« on: February 24, 2010, 02:33:21 pm »Excellent! I love how you portrayed me, maybe just a little too stupid however XP"Peeerveeert!"
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Posted by: TRHeadshot« on: February 24, 2010, 12:37:26 pm »Excellent! I love how you portrayed me, maybe just a little too stupid however XP
Posted by: Sir Modemkill, Cyborg!« on: February 24, 2010, 10:31:14 am »Just read it, pretty cool man.
Posted by: CrazyHobo« on: February 24, 2010, 10:27:54 am »something tells me, that I'll have to endure something crazy.
Posted by: VoraX« on: February 24, 2010, 10:23:24 am »Dont worry, Ill make sure you wont have "flawless victories" in the future.
Posted by: Meldon« on: February 24, 2010, 10:09:29 am »Hey, you're not a pro. When I write I'm pretty bad at the action parts and don't describe quite enough.
Posted by: CrazyHobo« on: February 24, 2010, 10:05:59 am »yeah, the whole "unscratched" thing is something, that happens to me all the time.
Automatically I write down flawless victories O.o Posted by: VoraX« on: February 24, 2010, 09:57:06 am »You are quite redundant when using subjects, and theres a feeling of ausence because you dont symbology link the apparition of two green, irradiated infected (could have something to do with radiation, a nuclear plant near maybe). There could be more hard for them to reach a safe zone, using their heads to make strategy, probable a plan, to avoid as much populated areas as posible. The cars should have being more damaged by constant infected throwing themselves at them, maybe long arms sharp bones could have scrathed them, and they would need repairment on the base...I could follow, but then I should write it myself, while I didnt lie, I still enjoyed it and the final is ok. It works and I wasnt asking for much more, consider it an exercise for when you participate more directly on the quest, as protagonist.
Posted by: CrazyHobo« on: February 24, 2010, 07:28:21 am »really?
I'm surprised. I thought it was fail  Posted by: VoraX« on: February 24, 2010, 07:24:42 am »I actually enjoy it very much, and I liked the ending. Cogratulations.
Ill try to make myself some spare time to continue the quest as soon as possible. Posted by: Meldon« on: February 24, 2010, 02:08:56 am »Now I'm glad I couldn't write it myself XD
Posted by: Thuggernaut« on: February 24, 2010, 01:40:26 am »I like!
Posted by: CrazyHobo« on: February 23, 2010, 11:01:14 pm »it's finished and posted in Archlord's Quest.
Posted by: Meldon« on: February 23, 2010, 04:39:16 pm »Yes Des, that is correct.
Posted by: destroyer13« on: February 23, 2010, 01:16:28 pm »I know how to say russian in french!!! its russe!! if i remember correctly.
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