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Posted by: destroyer13
« on: February 06, 2010, 03:17:14 pm »what to chop the meat and man this beef jerky in my mout sticking out makes me feel like im smokin a cigar.
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Posted by: Genericamel« on: February 06, 2010, 10:08:39 am »i can spell check in a bit =/ meh i have great ideas just getting them on paper is whats hard
Posted by: Thuggernaut« on: February 06, 2010, 04:01:43 am »It's good for the first time, but I see lotsa spelling errors, maybe some missing punctuation >_>
Posted by: Genericamel« on: February 05, 2010, 02:31:11 pm »is therre gunna be beef jerky in ur story? if so than epic!!!!!!!!!!!guess there could be  Posted by: destroyer13« on: February 05, 2010, 01:36:22 pm »is therre gunna be beef jerky in ur story? if so than epic!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: Genericamel« on: February 05, 2010, 04:36:55 am »hey, I liked it. just the first chapter gonna try and shoot out at least 1 more chapter by this weekend if you wanna be in the story be sure and post here otherwise its gonna be people like modem and crazyhobo and the Draconis and Fenrir and some reapers Posted by: CrazyHobo« on: February 05, 2010, 01:12:25 am »hey, I liked it.
Seemed short, though. For a first try, it was good.  Posted by: destroyer13« on: February 04, 2010, 07:14:34 pm »Seems interesting >.>
Posted by: Genericamel« on: February 04, 2010, 07:12:22 pm »ha ok writing atleast 1 chapter tonight with a Prologue
Posted by: destroyer13« on: February 04, 2010, 07:10:49 pm »lol calm down dont worry non of us had a chance to read it and ill be looking forward 2 just not now since its a school night and im busy with gf.
Posted by: Genericamel« on: February 04, 2010, 07:05:07 pm »sorry if im not as good as you guys at writing stories
 this is my first time so cut me sum slack! Posted by: Genericamel« on: February 04, 2010, 06:42:18 pm »please discuss my story here or your thoughts on what i have got so far
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