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Posted by: Twilightpersona
« on: July 18, 2012, 07:27:50 am »

I would appreciate any feedback and opinions on my story. Please post it here and NOT in the shoutbox so I  don't drown looking for it, not that I'm mentioning any names...

<.<
>.>

Albel.
Posted by: Twilightpersona
« on: July 08, 2012, 09:53:47 am »

New chapter has been posted. It is chapter 6- revelation. Enjoy.
Posted by: Twilightpersona
« on: June 29, 2012, 07:31:51 am »

I'm going to take some time soon to write the next chapter, however I don't know how soon I will be posting it on the forum.

Posted by: Twilightpersona
« on: May 09, 2012, 04:01:24 am »

It has and it did. Now read it you harbinger of Khorne!
Posted by: BlackRain
« on: May 04, 2012, 08:17:02 am »

Damned well better.  >.>
Posted by: Twilightpersona
« on: May 04, 2012, 06:39:41 am »

More will be posted Tuesday.

No excuses this time. It shall be done.
Posted by: Twilightpersona
« on: April 30, 2012, 09:05:30 am »

More tomorrow.
Posted by: BlackRain
« on: April 30, 2012, 08:07:23 am »

Heh. Write more. I need something to read on the bus ride home. xD
Posted by: Twilightpersona
« on: April 30, 2012, 07:16:19 am »

Deja Vu is called Deja Vu for a reason. :P

That chapter signals that the story will be back in the present again.
Posted by: Parone92
« on: April 30, 2012, 07:12:43 am »

Pretty good story man. Although you could have done better with the Deja Vu chapter, i feel as though you just copied a lot from the first chapter. Overall very well done though, better than i could do.
Posted by: BlackRain
« on: April 30, 2012, 06:52:35 am »

While that is true, you're still improving.
Posted by: Twilightpersona
« on: April 30, 2012, 06:06:34 am »

Thanks. To be honest I don't see much of a difference between this addition and the one prior to.
Posted by: BlackRain
« on: April 27, 2012, 09:45:14 am »

Goooooood. xD You want me to muss up your story with another edit? You're starting to get the hang of it, though.
Posted by: Twilightpersona
« on: April 26, 2012, 08:03:23 am »

Albel your wish has been granted.
Posted by: BlackRain
« on: April 25, 2012, 12:16:51 pm »

... More, god damn it. >:C

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